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  • Sadness

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    another one written by my daughter...again, dealing with me.

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    I cut myself
    to make you see
    that there's really nothing
    left in me

    I did what you asked
    gave up the control
    let you be the mom for once
    and let you play that role

    But now as I look in from the side
    I see what you can't see
    two hearts breaking
    linked as one
    our family is breaking apart
    and now we are in
    up to our knees

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    Alexia commented on untitled

    06-23-2009

    wow this is a deep poem! you can really feel her heart breaking at the situation! Truly a sad piece.

    melissapaige

    06/24/2009

    yes it was a very sad situation, but through our love and strength and bond in each other, we have come out on the other side now! She is truly my GODSEND

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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