I wish

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    I wish

    I wish you would see, I could care for you in ways you've never felt.
    I wish you could feel how I feel for you, and see how you make my heart melt.
    I wish you would see that i'm waiting for you, just in case you change your mind.
    I wish you wouldn't treat me like this, I wish you wouldn't leave me behind.
    I hope you know I will always be here, just, please, don't take too long.
    I hope you know I would never hurt you, I would never do you wrong.
    So when you decide to uncover your eyes, and see i'm the one for you,
    just let me know, so i'm not left waiting, like you've always wanted me to.
    I won't be around forever, you know, waiting to see what you choose.
    Cause everytime I put that much in, it always seems i'm the one who'll lose.
    So I will sit around a little longer, to see if it's me you'll pick.
    But if that's not what you decide to do, I think my heart will feel sick.

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    Adara commented on I wish

    05-28-2009

    I really like this poem. You could most definately feel the pain that comes with it. I think the way that you express your feelings is fantastic. Keep it up.

    udontgetme commented on I wish

    12-26-2008

    good poem. I hope you have forgotten about that guy by now.

    rollerderby commented on I wish

    12-05-2008

    I could feel the pain in your poem. It's hard when the one you love doesn't feel the same. I know I've been there more than once. I hope things are better for your heart now. Thanks for sharing!

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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