If these walls could talk

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    If these walls could talk

    If these walls could talk

    She left out the back door when I was coming in the front
    They would act as a mirror and tell me I’m beautiful
    Because they know how many times I’ve cried
    They would tell me I’m brave
    Because they know between these four walls I hide
    They wouldn’t tell on you
    Because they keep secrets
    They ignore the figures and pictures we hang to hide the ugly of our pride
    If these walls could talk
    What would they say?
    Damn the price I would pay
    They would say the way the head board beats them up
    Screeches from her cheap painted on finger nails sealed their mouths shut
    Or the way you watch him turn of his phone and throw it at you
    With the rush of me coming home
    The way you show favoritism to me because you seen the way we made love, and made 3 boys
    That you grew to love and watch grow up
    But just like you walls
    I know the truth
    But..
    She left out the back door when I was coming in the front
    They would act as a mirror and tell me I’m beautiful
    Because they know how many times I’ve cried
    They would tell me I’m brave
    Because they know between these four walls I hide
    If these walls could talk
    They would say nothing at all

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    idolatree commented on If these walls could talk

    02-08-2010

    very beautiful and dark. i am glad to have read it.

    wildpendigus commented on If these walls could talk

    07-05-2009

    I like this one very uniqu, could be a very good song with the right music and production, I'm into music production and writing I wrote for some famous people so I'm sure it would come out nice! grecowong@yahoo.com

    wildpendigus

    07/05/2009

    Congratulations

    kdnez commented on If these walls could talk

    06-06-2009

    Deep Poem. I had to read it more than once!! The imagery that you used is far beyond your age. Please continue to write and check out some of my poems.

    shewheat46 commented on If these walls could talk

    05-20-2009

    That was deep, really deep. Peoples best words come from deep inside. Keep reaching bet you have a lot more words deep down inside.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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