Mirrors and Smoke

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    Mirrors and Smoke

    Mirrors and smoke
    I guess you can say woke up in fog
    Or you can say I didn’t go to sleep at all
    I dreamed of mirrors that reflected joy
    But the smoke took away the feeling then appeared a boy
    Or is it just Mirror and smoke
    On the dresser of the empty room stood a picture frame without a photo
    Just mirrors and smoke
    I stood there in my cold bed no pillows or sheets
    Just chills and the room that leaks
    Leaks no love, no pain just silence the worse remedy
    Then the thoughts came
    The darkness hit the fog; the mirror takes your identity
    The nights seems like eternity
    No outlet of lightness
    Righteousness becomes nothing
    Then you r heart good that feeling
    No beat just leaps of breathes
    No loves for steps
    Then work lungs work
    Your mind see things like your on dope
    Your palms are sweaty
    Your hands slip from the rope
    Whoooo just mirrors and smoke

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    gregster commented on Mirrors and Smoke

    03-22-2010

    I LIKE THIS AND I APPRECIATE IT......KEEP IT UP.....READ MY STUFF IF YOU LIKE,,,,,,,,,,,GOD BLESS IN JESUS CHRIST NAME...........STAY BREEZY

    Romano commented on Mirrors and Smoke

    06-11-2009

    I guess if it wasnt for smoke, how would the mirrors look. everyday life, i like it, just wish our minds werent so gamed out

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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