I'll Always Be Here

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  • Lost Love

    I'll Always Be Here
    His words stabbed me
    My walls crumbled
    In his arms I called home
    Don't tell me its over
    I don't want to be the first to go
    But I don't want to be the last to know
    When I leave...
    Will I be a shadow on his wall?
    Am I anything at all?
    It may have been bumpy
    Huge potholes even-
    But I'm no quitter, I don't give up
    I have given him my heart and soul
    I know I may give to much
    And there is much that I'll sacrifice
    But I have all the reasons
    Looking into his eyes
    Does he need me?
    Does he want me?
    I just want him to know
    I'll always be here

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    wildpendigus commented on I'll Always Be Here

    06-10-2009

    I think this is a very nice poem tells alot about your life story which good songs are made from, I'll bet this would make a good Rock song with hit chart possibilities, Congratulations grecowong@yahoo.com
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    Brat26 commented on I'll Always Be Here

    05-22-2009

    i liked it i thought it was good and u do really good poems i have read to others to and liked them as well
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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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