I'm Sorry

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I'm Sorry

I'm sorry I'm perfect.
I'm sorry that I am so much better than her.
I don't want to be,
but in your eyes I am.
I'm so sorry.
I DO things wrong,but you don't see it.
You think that I'm perfect,that I'm better,
but you don't see it.
I'm sorry I'm perfect,I'm better.
I'm sorry that I'm your favorite.
I am sorry,
I'M SO SORRY!

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kpeery09 commented on I'm Sorry

01-25-2010

Very Nice, I like it, keep up good work. Rating will be 10

HopeOhlarik commented on I'm Sorry

10-16-2009

it aint your fault sis, you didnt do anything wrong. he did.

Lolee commented on I'm Sorry

08-05-2009

This sounds like two people I know. They were sisters. They both wanted their father to love them, in the normal sense of the word of course. but the one sister looked just like her dad's mother, and the other sister looked just like the dad's mother IN law whom he hated. Needless to say the daughter that looked like the dad's mother, was perfect...and the daughter that looked like his overbearing mother in law, well... Anyway, great poem! thanks.

BearWalker

08/06/2009

you know thats intrsting.i look more like my mom's mom and i am his fave.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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