IN MEMORY OF GRANDMA

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    IN MEMORY OF GRANDMA

     Why did you have to go
    And leave your place
    G-ma I miss your touch
    And I miss your loving face

    When I think why he took you
    I knew i'd cry that day
    He took the best g-ma
    a girl could have away

    I know I wansnt the best grandaughter
    But I know you do
    Understand the hurt i am going through

    I wish he wouldn't of took you
    But i know you have wings and can fly
    Grandma I love you so much
    and that is why i cry

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    cmlestrade commented on IN MEMORY OF GRANDMA

    08-27-2009

    Oh my daughter and neices just loved their grandparents. They took her death so hard. She died on my daughter's birthday so she says that day is never happy for her. Well written and beautiful in it's sentiment.
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    Godsgang commented on IN MEMORY OF GRANDMA

    07-04-2009

    It has passion and heart. lost the flow in verse 3 slightly but overall excellent.
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