In my Thought

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    In my Thought

    Walk with me on a star lit night.
    Hold me when i'm in your site.
    For you stopped me and really care.
    When your eyes met mine with that certain stare...
    You found that stair-case in my garden near my heart.
    This was part of our new journey as we begin our start our parts.
    You then found my wings that we had lost and gave me time.
    With a verse he read to me;spoken well with no rhyme:
    "To the world you are but One,but to the One you are the world."
    As He spoke those words to me,astonished by his repose...
    The next flower to bloom within my garden was this big red rose.
    Then He knelt upon his knees to pluck this rose just for me.
    In my thought it was a dream.In his arms now I see..
    ."Love is spoken here my DEAR; so wipe away those silly tears."
    "I ;just love you,Dear!"" So spread your wings of hope; with no fears."
    Walking together on a star lit night;underneath the wings of love I hold."
    "Hold me when I'm in your sight;kiss me Dear for your my Gold..."
    In my Heart love was found.On the stairs today we do climb still.
    In my thought they were built by soul-mates in the essence of there will.
    If we could learn from this: The essence of life would be Love.....
    In my thought!

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    devaamido commented on In my Thought

    12-06-2010

    Very tender and ephemeral love poem notably suitable for couples past the watershed "high testosterone years", & probable most appreciated there. Nice!

    Hampton commented on In my Thought

    12-07-2009

    This is certainly a poem filled with love from beginning to end. Expressed in a soft poetic voice that rings true.

    blackfootlady

    12/08/2009

    My weakness is also a strength that exspress thru love most times,ty and the truth does set us all free to be who we are.

    markrohaley commented on In my Thought

    01-27-2009

    nice churv!

    blackfootlady

    12/04/2009

    ty once more, I been so busy lately I forgot to write what I enjoy most and thats poetry.

    libra46 commented on In my Thought

    01-24-2009

    This is a very beautiful and sweet poem. Keep witing ,you have talent.

    blackfootlady

    12/04/2009

    Libra46 everyones been hounding me to do this for quite some time.Can you believe I've been sitting on top of petry for about 30 years and I decided to do this,Anyways I suppose I'm a riot,God Bless and tc

    Realistic commented on In my Thought

    01-23-2009

    I like this

    blackfootlady

    12/04/2009

    Ah yes it's based on a real relationship I have with my husband,I apoligize in being so belated with my response .ty I'm pleased that you like this one,God Bless.

    blackfootlady

    12/04/2009

    Ah yes it's based on a real relationship I have with my husband,I apoligize in being so belated with my response .ty I'm pleased that you like this one,God Bless.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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