In Your Arms

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    In Your Arms
    I truly believe that I could stay in your arms forever
    Perfectly all wrapped up like a Present on Christmas Day!
    Lying in your arms so contently
    As time seems too simple pass away!
    Lying here with you in your arms helpless and weakness
    I'm surrounded by all your love and all your sweetness
    Tell me what better a place than this
    Could there ever be!
    Than me lying here in your arms,
    And you passionately recite erotic words to me.
    Listening to the echo of your heartbeat gentle
    As we lay here naked in the arms of each other
    There's nothing that could be more significant to me
    Than the love that we both feel strongly for one another

    © Copyright 2009
    Aka Paradice

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    mamasan commented on In Your Arms

    12-07-2009

    Ah definitely it is obvious where your professional bent lies and perhaps you should write more of these poems and put a dent in the cost of health care; specifically the money spent on viagra....my goodness your words are more potent than viagra. You definitely are a good candidate for an ad which states: Read at your own risk because since your still so potent you just may have many unplanned children. So, maybe you should go for a vasectomy. My goodness your great and I see age is not a barrier of any sort.........
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    cmlestrade commented on In Your Arms

    12-03-2009

    Lucky lucky man. Not only do you express yourself so wonderfully, you are not afraid to show this prince just how much he means to you. I wrote a poem about characters named Mr and Mrs Johnson. They were fictitious stereotypes that seem all to real, I wish this type of love was the prototype and the stereotype. Life would be much better.
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    Paradice21

    12/03/2009

    You right....If that was the case Life and Love would be completely Wonderful!!Thanks for the Comment and Stay Blessed!!

    Paradice21

    12/03/2009

    You right....If that was the case Life and Love would be completely Wonderful!!Thanks for the Comment and Stay Blessed!!

    sexybronze commented on In Your Arms

    09-21-2009

    (in your arms) that bringz back some memoriez and in that moment we dont want that day 2 come 2 and end. as if we had it our way, that day will last forever. Paradice, u put alot of feelingz in your writing making the reader have chillz as i imagine being in that situation.
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    LEAKINGPEN commented on In Your Arms

    08-27-2009

    Wow, this poems warms my mind and my body! Makes me want to go home to my lady and do all of these things with her. Reading your poems are giving me a lot of hints and pointers. Like I said before...Keep em coming!
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    Mrpoetry commented on In Your Arms

    08-24-2009

    another dime poem like I said earlier you have a lot of love to share and whoever he is I am sure he has a smile on his face
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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