Inner Angles 12/31/2008

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    Inner Angles 12/31/2008
    Inner Angles 12/31/2008
    I’ve gone thru so much already in my life
    Life is strife and pain like knives
    It’s my strides—how I strive to believe
    When all of my body my mind wants to deceive
    Makes me perceive that it’s too late
    End of debate—forget an escape
    But I know inside
    That this is not fate—but thoughts of self hate
    The voices speak in words inaudible but compelling
    Draggin me in—tearing me down
    Outside I smile—inside a frown
    I drown in anxiety – insecurity
    A moment an eternity
    But I can’t succumb to these feelings inside
    When I know it’s false
    I’m so much stronger than even I know
    Have so much more to know and grow … Show!
    I have so much more to give
    So much more to create in this world of beauty and might
    I can’t help but fight defeat though pressures squeeze tight
    Think I can’t stand it
    Till I start to demand it
    From myself
    This hand I’ve been dealt
    The best hand I could’ve been given
    The only way I’ll ever be jailed
    Is if within I am imprisoned.

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    mrletsfitit commented on Inner Angles 12/31/2008

    06-16-2009

    I like it. I could feel your emotion while I WAS READING it. This is a power piece. Keep writing. It's truly a verbal shower
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    prophesy commented on Inner Angles 12/31/2008

    01-26-2009

    i feel your pain, an this to shall pass by, for nothing last forever but he. thanx an cotiue the verbalshowers that dawn upon me. (contiued blessings)peace n prophesy
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    jacquez commented on Inner Angles 12/31/2008

    01-20-2009

    wow thats great! I really shows wut alot or everyone really, goes through in life...nice!
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    ndg commented on Inner Angles 12/31/2008

    01-07-2009

    Very good
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    soulwriter commented on Inner Angles 12/31/2008

    01-03-2009

    I am not much for rhyme for I feel that it can subject the true thought being expressed into a collective box - in other words, words are penned just because the sound like another not because they express the true feeling of the author --- I said al
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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