Inside

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  • Dark Poetry

    Inside
    Seclusion beating at my door, waking my senses
    Love, a distant memory slowly fading
    Desire and passion like a loyal dog, always following

    For a brief moment, there’s a sound
    A desire to come in out of the cold, pounding rain
    Once inside,
    The warmth is too much…
    Acclimatized to the cold
    The footsteps start fading

    Seclusion returns, enjoying the warmth
    Desire and passion imprisoning with suffocating strength
    Making the night seem kind

    Waiting for the pounding…
    Pounding force…
    Scaring away seclusion
    Fulfilling the desire and passion
    Embracing…
    Touching…
    Loving…
    Coming and going
    Inside

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    dahlusion commented on Inside

    01-20-2010

    Deep thinking, focused, and loyal to your feelings.
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    klassik commented on Inside

    09-14-2009

    this is very nice great read! .
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    castlemist commented on Inside

    08-07-2009

    Wow, this is really a powerful poem.."like a loyal dog"...nice work!
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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