Internet Site Gives Delight

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Money has taken the upper hand, This all must understand, Poor souls could not withstand, But, Internet sites offer free space-land, To make lives of writers grand.

Internet Site Gives Delight


Future seems to be bleak
Mind fears like a freak

None to come for support
Heart is a demolished fort

Sorrow grows with rapidity
Joy is a costly commodity

No friends to comfort
Very sad is my heart

Why money has taken over
Giving to all a greedy fever?

After seeing an empty pocket
All fly away like Apollo rocket

Even those who received help
Do not want relation to develop

In terms of money only all view
Their love has melted like dew

Love, affection and kindness
Are left by all with firmness

A purse that is very thin
Is avoided by all like sin

Love and affection are lost
To leave the poor, all are fast

So life's meaning is revealed
All grow money in life-field

Only internet sites are free
To help they kindly agree

They give in their hearts space
They help us in too many ways

I thank God for their generosity
They mercifully respect liberty

My thoughts I can freely submit
For which they lovingly permit

This service is indeed noble
Due to them I feel not feeble

I thank them with gratitude
They are not at all rude

I have for them great regards
My mind each site safeguards

O- God- Give me power to write
By working hard day and night

This is my most sincere appeal
For this only I before you kneel.

mvvenkataraman

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WordSlinger commented on Internet Site Gives Delight

12-21-2010

I like this, so true, this poem is so need'd today, brilliant, ty WS

mvvenkataraman

08/13/2011

Dear WordSlinger, In my heart, your comment will ever linger making me stronger. mvvenkataraman

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Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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