Life-Journey Thorny, Sunny And Funny

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A poetry about life-journey's various stages, Having love-bondages, We enjoy advantages suffering also disadvantages, At last all behave like sages, After undergoing all sorts of damages, After all our life only God manages, A noble soul He encourages.

Life-Journey Thorny, Sunny And Funny



First from father to mother
Then from mother to the Earth
That was the story of my birth
Now hear my life's journey brother

With crawling I slowly started
After getting sufficient strength
I made stumbling walks for a small length
Appreciation from parents was whole-hearted

Then one day I independently walked
With joy my parents gleefully danced
As their encouragement they enhanced
Courage and confidence were stocked

To my school I walked alone
Which was a thrilling experience
I could perform running with convenience
My journeying skill had superbly grown

To friends' home I could make a visit
Using a beautiful costly cute bi-cycle
Most of my journey happened in that vehicle
In a place my youth allowed me not to sit

A girl became my close friend
With her took place my life's journey
I called her as my sweet darling honey
In holy marriage our friendship did end

For getting a job I traveled
Then for doing the job I moved
Journeys' worth my transfers proved
As superior positions I boldly held

After our one and only child's arrival
To beach, circus and picture we went
In traveling our time was spent
By those journeys we felt very well

Traveling to various hospitals
For health purposes we made
For getting from God shade
Visiting Temples, we offered petals

Last journey was made with none
What a traveling from birth to death!
The acquired experience is really worth
Under the Sun, what a fun for everyone!

M V VENKATARAMAN

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Marsink commented on Life-Journey Thorny, Sunny And Funny

02-14-2010

Quite the epic journey wrapped up in a gift of words to share graciously with fellow poets. You have a gift to share, so carry on and write on, Sir!

mvvenkataraman

02/15/2010

Dear respected Marsink and Word Slinger, What a joy I could grandly get! Your comment saved me I bet This help I will never at all forget Mirth is now by me safely met. With best wishes, Thanking you, Yours truly, M V VENKATARAMAN

Marsink

02/27/2010

You're most welcome, Sir!

WordSlinger commented on Life-Journey Thorny, Sunny And Funny

01-24-2010

John Lennon in the last part of his life, imagine if we all had video of our life, and rewinding some for good or ba, ty WS

mvvenkataraman

01/24/2010

Dear respected WordSlinger, In my observation so far You are very kind-hearted You always go to rescue Your mind equals an Angel's You must be by God blessed For which my mind prays deeply O- God and Jesus- Bless WordSlinger His soul resembles that of yours. With best wishes, Thanking you, Yours truly, M V VENKATARAMAN

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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