Intoxicated driving

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I dedicate this fictional poem to all of the innocent people who have been killed by drunk drivers.

Intoxicated driving

An entire family is dead and I'm the one to blame.
I drove while I was drunk and I'm filled with shame.
I drank too much while I was in that bar.
It was a big mistake when I drove my car.
While I was driving, I hit a stationwagon head on.
Because of me, those innocent people are gone.
I killed those parents and their three kids.
The pain is consuming me because of what I did.
Those kids won't have a life because I cut them down.
I am the one who deserves to be buried in the ground.
When the cops arrived, I was placed under arrest.
As I sit in this cell, I am miserable and depressed.
I wish that this was a nightmare but sadly it's real.
I learned the hard way that drinking and driving kills.

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BrokenHeart2009 commented on Intoxicated driving

10-06-2010

What a wonderful poem poem on drinking and driving. It is very sad, but enlightening. The choices we make how the effects on others can change a life time. I think it is very depressing, but a poem that needs to be shared.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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