Islands

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Islands

All our lives are little whiles
Waiting for the next upset
The next interesting thing
The next numbingly mundane crush
That consumes us and makes us more than ourselves
If only for a little while

All our lives are waiting to be what we are not
What we cannot be without each other

Loneliness is an ache deeper than pain
It is the darkness itself
The undefined shapes in our mind that torture us
When we lay alone in the early morning hours
Groping across the sheets hoping to bridge the gap
Between my island and yours

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TheLastCowboy commented on Islands

10-22-2012

Wow, Beautiful!!!! your point is clear and very well understood from the way you wrote it! Awesome writing!!! Hands down a 10, Loved the ending!!!

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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