Wanting

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    Wanting

     What makes me want
    In order for me to love you you have to be very strong in some ways, yet very weak in others
    You've got both in spades and I've wanted you for days

    But I don't have to love you to love having you
    And sometimes love makes it harder
    So wouldn't it all be better for all of us
    If we'd pretend to be content with what we have

    I don't need to love you, I just want to hold you
    Stop whispering those nothings in my ear
    Take off your clothes and get over here

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    TheLastCowboy commented on Wanting

    10-22-2012

    good write, loved the ending, good point in the begging. :)
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