Jumping Heart.

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    Jumping Heart.

      Jitters run
     Like cold water
     Through My spine
      Unable to ease my palpitating nerves
      My heart is in my mouth
      And I wonder if to spit it or force it down
      But I have very little time for an answer
      Because the circle has started all over
      As I hear my self stiffle a scream
      Of conscientious trepidation
      Or am I hyper ventilating?

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    Chaos128 commented on Jumping Heart.

    10-20-2009

    This is compelling, Slayer. I always like work that leaves something unsaid because it puts the reader's imagination to work and makes the experience that much more intriguing. Good work!
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