~Just Wanna Be Free~

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    ~Just Wanna Be Free~

    Standing on the edge
    Staring into the abyss
    I can feel the darkness
    It consumes me like a wild fire
    I can't break free
    It holds me down and crushes all my dreams
    I wish I could just pour my heart out
    There's so many feelings I can't express
    I'm so Lost!
    What I know, I don't even know
    Like a caterpillar, I'm waiting on my chance to be a butterfly
    I can hardly wait to embrace my beauty
    But yet, and still, something holds me back
    I'm not strong enough
    I can't even realize who I am anymore
    I can look into a mirror and still not even see me
    Who am I?..
    The world is so crowded, but I still feel alone
    Is this who i really am?
    Maybe this is who I'm suppose to be,
    someone who doesn't really know...
    whose all confused and lost and scared
    My walls are closing in
    I can't breath
    My lungs are so inflamed,
    that I don't feel like living life anymore.
    If I only had a second to grasp some air
    just a little air
    just a little break from it all
    But I can't, everything is steadily rushed upon me
    I'm dying on the inside and I wanna scream for help
    But I'm not strong enough
    I'm Never Strong Enough!
    I continue to wear this mask & pretend everything is alright
    But I just wanna scream out:
    IT'S NOT ALRIGHT!!!
    But I'm not strong enough
    Concealed inside myself
    There's only one thing I know for sure...

    I Just Wanna Be Free.


                                                              -DANi89Rose-

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    queendee commented on ~Just Wanna Be Free~

    08-03-2009

    When I read this poem it seems all to familuar. At times I feel the same and others I have moved past the rushing of everthing. I do not want to asume that this is you you are talking about but if it is you are not alone. Sometimes yelling is the best thing to do sometimes its not but life is about those mastakes. Most time people wont be around to hear you even when you are screaming your loudest for help but sometimes they are. I am finding more and more that its through what I have inside that keeps me goin, you know all the crap I ve been through and that strength is really not something you need. You will have what you need when you need it and you will get through a day as you did the last. Just sometimes I say well I just have 20 more hours left to go till it comes to an end, for at least know, and just when I want to end it all for good I just pray that the next day will be brighter and whether or not it is better the sun still seems to rise.
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    jferclark commented on ~Just Wanna Be Free~

    08-03-2009

    "Those who the Son sets free shall be free indeed!"
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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