Last Sky

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    Last Sky

    Years I've been just growing towards the sky
    many things I've seen many friends seen felled
    seen sunny skies clouds up high birds in sky
    look out my last many years roots have held


    Feel the wind kiss my leaves gentle rain falls
    branches full spread take in the air around me
    sun comes out my old friend seen me grow so tall
    look down upon the forest floor many friends see

    Sadness fills every branch i look out on my last
    feel the pain the cutting saw embedded in me
    will miss my forest all my friends all my past
    look back as i fall no more sky will i see

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    am2anangel commented on Last Sky

    08-10-2011

    great metaphorical write enjoyed the tree to life comparison. well done. -Tonya

    inkmaster commented on Last Sky

    01-30-2010

    A great tribute to the forrest..I spend a lot of time there myself. ~Inkmaster~ Jeff

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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