Life: Plain and Simple

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  • blackrose95
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Poetry Rocks!

Life: Plain and Simple

Life. Death. Rebirth.

All we’re doing is borrowing from the earth.

No one knows when time’s up on the clock.

You can’t tell when Death’s gonna knock.

With this piece of information, we all try to cope.

Some taunt, others scoff, and a few pray and hope.

We’ve all wasted time obsessing over the guy or girl next door.

We think they’re so cool; the mystery of them attracts us to them even more.

But after the veil is lifted, we come to see they’re such a bore.

Complaining and bickering ensues, when love and assurance is in need.

We say, why oh why did I ignore my elders pleas to take heed?

You say your choice will be different next time around.

But over & over the same mistakes are made, no new answer is found.

Yet still you try,

And no matter how frustrated, you never cry.

So maybe, this isn’t an answer you’re supposed to find.

I mean, isn’t that what life’s about: Going through it blind?

                                                                                                                                                                                              -Blackrose95

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MalikPeterson commented on Life: Plain and Simple

03-08-2010

This is a good one. There is a lot of wisdom in it. We humans are often the deaf dumb and blind...who often never learn. Good job :)

JaleesaSoco commented on Life: Plain and Simple

03-01-2010

Wow! This one makes you think...I like everything about it. Powerful write!!!! Great job

MarionYost commented on Life: Plain and Simple

02-26-2010

This is Hitting My "favorites" archives! AWESOME And yes, The point does come across clearly! great job hun, As always. All the best -Marion-

blackrose95

02/26/2010

You really think its that good? Thanks! I wasn't so sure.

Tempy commented on Life: Plain and Simple

02-26-2010

cute poem! I've never had a neighbour thing but for those that dig it you have written a lovely write~!

blackrose95

02/26/2010

Thank you. Also I've never been actracted to my neighbor either. I've just seen a lot of movies with that theme. :)

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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