My Barely Bearable Desires Part 2

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I hope no one's too nauseated.

My Barely Bearable Desires Part 2

My heart yearns for her presence.

I can’t sleep anymore, it feels like my feelings for her are my very essence.

I’m scared of being rejected, I’d persevere but the feelings- the desire would keep burning in my soul;

Like a torch of my unreturned passion for her. She stole-

The key and when she finds out she’ll most likely throw it back in my face.

She’ll probably think I’m nothing but a disgrace.

Maybe I don’t belong even in the corner of her life.

I’m so filled with all these emotions, it’s causing me so much strife.

I should just let her be,

Before she discovers me.

But I won’t, because I want her.

This act alone will eventually be my undoing.

                                                                               -Blackrose95

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MarionYost commented on My Barely Bearable Desires Part 2

01-26-2010

Wow..... Just, WOW. Where do you get off being all modest? Hahaha... Seriously, great write. I can definitely appreciate your work. You should read my "Untitled" and "Friends" I think you could relate.. All the best -Marion-

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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