My Dad
He comes by a couple hours a week.
When he sees me, he only sees nice, meek.
If he cared enough to look closer,
He’d see his own rebellious streak.
-Blackrose95
My Dad
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- blackrose95
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Poem Commentary
This is of course the relationship I have with my dad. I'm sorry its so short,but I don't think it needed anymore.
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MarionYost commented on My Dad
02-13-2010
- Damn, This is SHORT. sounds like your relationship with your dad is like mine w/ my "Mother" Btw.. You should read my poem "Mother".. I think you'd like it... Just, think of your dad instead. ;) All the best -Marion-
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