Life through my eyes

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  • is spilling the emotions on a page like a graphfitti wall

Life through my eyes

Melting away like a candle
the flame flickering as the wax runs down
its like the tears of somone who just
got there heart broken as the heart break
sparks the tears to run down their face
life is the same way the older the candle
the faster it will burn
yet at the same time the shorter the candle
the less you will have to live
but as for the colors and fregrances
depends on the person the mood
or even the personality they feel
at the exact moment in time
the sweeter the smell does not mean its sweet
it could actually be the sweeter the smell
could be just as bitter.
so how is this life compare to a candle
simple that our emotions and lifespand
could mark the time we have left
but as for the inner flame that burns
deep inside we may never know until
we die.

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When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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