What Is This

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    • shane23
    • is spilling the emotions on a page like a graphfitti wall

    What Is This
    lost and confused
    feelings twisted thoughts lost
    not knowing who you are
    schizo in your own way
    whats morally right and wrong
    manners lost among the rest of life
    your brain short circuting
    decisions impaired
    whats next for you
    whats the last chapter in your life
    how do you fix the wrongs
    you chose to do in life
    whats most important
    is it the money, family, or friends
    who will always be there
    why is this world so confused
    why must we all be lost
    why do we endure more pain then happiness
    is this life or just a bad dream.

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    anneliseh commented on What Is This

    06-29-2009

    this is a really good concept. and the words flow nicely, i think
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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