Life's Moments

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    Life's Moments

    Precious moments,
    how they pass in the blink of an eye,
    Like a raindrop's decent from the clouds in the sky.
    Quickly forgotten, once its splash hits the ground,
    Like so many moments whose importance has drowned.
    Experiences deemed bad seem to shadow all good,
    Always stressing imperfections
    so much more than we should.
    Frustrations and disappointments ring clear in our minds.
    Happiness and joy are too easily left behind.
    Searching for that perfect moment becomes our soul obsession,
    instead of relishing every moment without perilous regression.

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    extrarib commented on Life's Moments

    05-25-2009

    Very nice job. Its clearly written with a completed thought process and as you read, you can identify with the passion felt while writing. Thanks!

    origionalmerlin commented on Life's Moments

    04-28-2009

    drat rating this a 10 only brought it up to 7.7.. great observation and perspective a good read..

    strechless5 commented on Life's Moments

    11-24-2008

    that is a very nice poem.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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