Lightning deep clouds

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    Lightning deep clouds

    You who are not within your bed
    you who are not within your clothes
    silk nor military wool
    You who are not within your home
    You are not the lungs that breath
    nor skin, blood, or bone
    And I am not a gospel
    or a phosphorescent light
    lines deepen my face for love
    my limbs thickened from my lust
    not the eyes but the twitch
    not the sky but my wind
    We are vapors in between
    what is solid and what is disbelief
    When I found you there
    in that parking lot
    like a ray gun through a raindrop
    I was your angel

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    deeGenovese commented on Lightning deep clouds

    09-14-2009

    extremely deep, personal intensity!!!!! this is very difficult for another to understand!! i can FEEL your words!!!

    Merrilyn commented on Lightning deep clouds

    03-26-2009

    To be honest i dont understand can you explain if you dont mind

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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