Lightning strikes

2 Comments

Tags:
  • Passion

    Lightning strikes

    The 'r' in her prettiness was silent as she introduced herself.
    The way she dressed showed nothing of the wilds, or the wiles, that indeed she did possess.
    but,
    Her smile she could not conceal,

    especially in the midnight blue.

    ...I found myself charmed
    like a cobra swaying to the sound of a flute
    that nobody else could hear.

    and,
    I could hardly care
    about anything but the magical sound of her laughter.

    I could regret it after,
    or later,
    but the chimes, chiming;
    in the gusting breezes of these nights seemed -

    simply,
    symphonic,
    with the way she moved.

    And, the tears which resulted from giddy intoxication,

    burned like a fire of joy down into my wicked, wicked heart.
    Which had been poised to strike at just the crack of lightning.

    Poem Comments

    (2)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    knight4696 commented on Lightning strikes

    01-02-2010

    I like this one the best thus far ... It is written cleverly and the imagery and metaphors are superb! Great Job!

    lightcourier commented on Lightning strikes

    03-18-2009

    I really liked the allegory in this poem. Entrancing.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

    Faded’s Poems (3)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    Prayer of Gratitude. 1
    Lightning strikes 2
    Attention. 2