lillies

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    this poem is also in acrostic form.

    lillies

    Lillies lay upon a bed of sorrow,
    Immobilized by the beautiful view,
    Floating down awaiting my tomorrow,
    Everlasting joy emitting from you,
    Into the air these flowers fly,
    Soaring into the never ending abyss,
    Beautifully made in the sky,
    Every one like a tiny sweet kiss,
    All at once they brilliantly bloom,
    Under the moon blossoms illuminate,
    Till they fall with a resounding boom,
    Indigo pedals strong enough to sedate,
    Floating forever make me wish for more,
    Under the moon waiting for my falling pedal,
    Lying here with the flower i adore.

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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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