Living The Moment!!!

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    Living The Moment!!!

    Woke up that morning
    Sat down started writing
    Later that evening decided to take a walk
    Down the beach so i can listen the winds talk
    Waves were being moved by the winds
    While a beautiful bird sings
    Like the sounds of great gone kings
    Waters fading from blue, the sun shinning
    Yellow sunset view making my mind winning
    Everything silenced by love sounds of nature
    There i saw beauty passing by
    Breathing softly as she runs by
    Once i saw her in a dream
    Now its real out of a dream
    There she pass me by
    Taking my heart so high
    She was like a mark that my eyes have never seen before
    My legs trembled while my heart struggled
    A young heart was put to stop
    I so wished i could throw a rope
    Deep feelings ran through me
    Voices of the wind pushed me
    Wished she knew how i was feeling
    In her heart, on my knees i'll be kneeling
    Deep in me i wish she could see
    I asked myself
    Does she know what she put me through
    Does she even know that i could be true
    All she saw was a simple man and she smiled
    But she dont know how my heart was raised
    Still she gave me the best moment ever
    And am gonna cherish it forever
    Make it like a heart's feather
    And i know wherever she is
    She's just great the way she is
    Her presence that evening gave me wings to fly
    And still living that moment and wont let it die

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    Realtalk commented on Living The Moment!!!

    04-14-2009

    You paint pictures in my mind, I love your flow Jonas! "Down the beach so i can listen the winds talk", "Everything silenced by love sounds of nature" ...this poem sounds like she is haunting you the moments you had. nice

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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