Looking Ahead

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Looking Ahead

Planning our lives together
planning the future
setting goals to reach
hoping that you wont be alone
tryiing to avoid any mistakes
that could end everything
trying to fix things
but it not worth it
tired of arguing
tired of the lies
be real with me
and don't be frontin
can't deal with this anymore
living in misery
I'm walking away
and looking ahead

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GucciGurl commented on Looking Ahead

07-16-2009

Walking away and looking ahead. This is a great line. Why do we always chose to look at the past when it comes to love. Then we miss out on so much that we could share with someone who really cares. There is always more love just waiting for someone to give away if we will only let it happen. I think your work gets better everytime

DaReality1

07/17/2009

thank you so much.i'm actually going to take my own advice and movin on n out. thanks for all of your comments. this is my first time sharing some of my work with anybody. but Im glad that I did. I met a cocl person.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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