LOVE GONE AWAY

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    LOVE GONE AWAY

    I stared love straight in the eyes. I was face to face with it. I didn't want to own up to it at first, but it was there one minute and the next minute it was gone. Taken away.....from me.

    What did I do? What did I say? One wrong word and love went away. I'm sorry I apologize. I don't know what to do. My heart is broken and I'm desperately missing you.

    To hear your voice. To hear your tone. Even if just over the phone. A tear in the seams that I tore. I was really hoping that we became more.....than friends.

    We were getting closer. You were becoming my world, and I thought.....well I thought I was becoming your girl. In as instant, it was gone, I didn't know. I had so much love to give. So much love to show.

    A wonderful person. A kind heart. Hurting your feelings was never a part.....of the program. I apologize. No harsh words, no bad things to say. I stared love straight in the eyes, face to face, and now.....it's gone away.

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    boomboom56 commented on LOVE GONE AWAY

    09-17-2009

    Sad stuff. Your words really say how you were touched by the moment. I hope you continue to write and allow these humble eyes to enjoy your work.

    TigerLily

    12/31/2009

    I do apologize for just responding. It is rare I come to this site,which I plan on getting better about that. I do still write. Writing is my passion. With this poem, I did feel a little sad, because he is a good person, and the last thing I ever want to do is hurt another persons feelings., but it just wasn't meant to be.......and life goes on.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    TigerLily’s Poems (6)

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    IN THE BLINK OF AN EYE 1
    HIS WORD 3
    If Only 3
    SO FINE 2
    LOVE GONE AWAY 1
    ENCOURAGEMENT 3