Love Upon A Breeze

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    Love Upon A Breeze

     Her heart will melt
    Like the wax on a lit candle
    His words are carried on a light breeze
    When his voice whispers in her ears
    She will listen with a flirtful smile

    Her heart will go cold
    As if touched by ice
    If the breeze turns another direction
    He will not be heard
    She will turn and walk away

    Her heart will glow
    Like the flame on a candle
    When his words flow in her soul
    He will be heard
    She will stay and never walk away.

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    optimistic commented on Love Upon A Breeze

    06-10-2009

    I like If the breeze turns another direction he will not be heard. Interesting display of words I don't know if you meant to do this or not the word whispers. Great poem
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    DravenBlythe

    06/11/2009

    I meant to do it.I thank you for your comments.

    DravenBlythe

    06/11/2009

    I'm sorry I miss typed.Thanks for letting me know.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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