Love

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    Love

    There was a time you weren't there
    and I was trapped in a darkness
    greiving, cus' life just wasn't fair
    bad luck just would not miss

    Then you walked in the door
    and gave my life new meaning
    I knew I couldnt ask for more
    Cus' now I have you for leaning

    I want you to know this is for you
    cus I cant write about anything more
    So my thoughts of love will have do
    and I know this attempt is very poor

    Because words just can't express
    the way you occupy every thought
    So much that I can hardly even rest
    My finals words? I love you alot.

     

     

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    stever commented on Love

    12-17-2009

    p.s. i wrote some new ones you might want to read

    stever commented on Love

    12-17-2009

    this is a good poem honey,, i hope that all your dreams come true.. an if some dont there are new ones to dream.. love ya dad

    MaxMoto commented on Love

    12-07-2009

    Glad to hear your finding what you needed. Hope all goes well into your future. Try adding a few more details to tie everything together.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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