cousinsoren commented on New light

03-11-2010

Nice ramntic ditty, rapid,short vrses conveys passion verywell. This poem comes on strong. Its cosmetic would improve with piunctuation to slow down the tempo a bit, A torrid little poem! "You can turn my night into day" is pretty. The musicality of this poemis pleasing. My rating for its heat or passion is 8.

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stever commented on New light

01-17-2010

THIS IS A ANOUTHER GOOD ONE BABO..YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE...WRITE ON...sTeVeR

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RonicaLeigh commented on New light

11-26-2009

This is very good especially from someone as young as you are. However those feelings are the same for all of the ages. Good work.

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MaxMoto commented on New light

11-25-2009

Good work girl ! having known you all you life, I didn't know you had the gift to write like this. Keep posting.

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mamasan commented on New light

11-21-2009

Nice read and good wordcraft for one so young. Keep it up and you may become a famous bard some day. Meantime, take good care of yourself because you know whats best for you. Give yourself the best of care for you owe it to yourself. Remember love is there for us but we have to sometimes wait a while. Just remember the good things in life depend on us.

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