LOVE’S WISDOM SUNG FOR A DEAR ONE

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LOVE’S WISDOM SUNG FOR A DEAR ONE


White World, a land forever in Love and Mercy
Soul serves through bliss and wisdom
The Child of God sees and expresses.

Yellow World, a land of forever songs
Fields of sound and color fills thy Soul
Creation born in creativity, Soul lives.

Gold World, a land of beauty
Songs of joy fills the moments
Soul stands free, unencumbered.

Break line ***** Worlds of Nature ***** Break line

Fragile lives we live
Threaded through links and chains
Soul must live the best It can.

Threaded by physical cords
Man believes itself solid
Soul becomes free through God’s love.

Hearts upon hearts, layered through universes
Man only sees the muscle, an organ of blood
Soul surrenders, flying through and into the Heart of God.

Aeons of Teachers look on in love
Man struggles in the hardness of their thoughts
Soul receives bliss from God’s love.

Healings flow through our fragile lives
Man searches for answers with their eyes.
Soul sees only God’s love, expressing ITSELF to ALL.

Bodies struggle to survive in changing universes
Man battles to keep what it has
Soul rejoices and frees Itself in God’s love.

Break line ***** Worlds of God ***** Break line

Breathe Dear One and see only God’s love
Man will always suffer through limitations
Soul lives eternally in God’s Bliss, Love and Mercy.

Breathe Dear One the nectar of God’s Bliss
Natures surrender to the onslaught of ITS Waves
Soul and body metamorphize inside God’s love.

Breathe Dear One, for your Child forever sees.
Breathe Dear One, you’re surrounded in love eternal
Breathe Dear One, hands and cords wrap you in love.

The Child sees and smiles.

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JAlden commented on LOVE’S WISDOM SUNG FOR A DEAR ONE

05-19-2009

Very good! This is the best piece of poetry I've read so far! I still have some constructive criticism, however. If I were you, I'd put "The Soul" rather than simply "soul." The reason, is, while putting "Soul" out there works for something like a Haiku, your poem is too delicate and well worded to have such blunt statements by simply saying: "Soul." Really great though! Thank you so much for sharing!

thankful67 commented on LOVE’S WISDOM SUNG FOR A DEAR ONE

05-18-2009

first time to the site I really enjoyed this poem. thankful67

MysticFire commented on LOVE’S WISDOM SUNG FOR A DEAR ONE

05-15-2009

this is very profound,well rounded,excellent imagery and so thought envoking... I am well impressed...

origionalmerlin commented on LOVE’S WISDOM SUNG FOR A DEAR ONE

05-09-2009

... It works (grinz)

Spiralout1022 commented on LOVE’S WISDOM SUNG FOR A DEAR ONE

05-08-2009

wow its so otherworldly so spiritual, like a physical vessel striving to be released so the soul may flourish, i seek this release everyday, i dont get closer to death i run towards life, i personally do not believe in the higher being but have never doubted the existence or importance of the soul, and i can see this is my general thoughts in your words, beautiful

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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