Lucky Dog

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Lucky Dog

You lucky dogs

What my grandma used to say

When my dad and sister

Used to be jealous of one another

You lucky dog you

 

I think its quite funny

Cause look at what it sounds

More of a name in fact

A name for jealousy

Ha! Ha!

You lucky dog you

 

The truth is we should not be jealous

For were our own selves

That’s all that’s needed

Be proud of yourself

Because no one can take that away

 

So when you say lucky dog

Think of being jealous

And what I had to say

You Lucky dog

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Chaos128 commented on Lucky Dog

06-27-2009

Very folksy and enjoyable...and literate. You've got a lot of talent, Tori. You're such a lucky dog.

toriatea

06/27/2009

lol thank you lol you got talent your self chaos128

Darkxaster commented on Lucky Dog

06-27-2009

lol i like the licky dog come to think of where is my dog hmmmm i dont know anyways good poem nice work

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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