helicopters

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helicopters

Remote control helicopters,

Time capsules, and a writing pad.

It all seems to be playful,

Until they bring out the big boys.

Its race after race

Tell you nock them down

Then they give a helluva roar

 

Was goanna nock you down,

Am goanna put a missiles to the grown,

And blow it off them hedges

I think maybe I will give the copter a test

I think latter it seems yawl are racing

To the death,

So I’ll just write

As you all fight

 

Remote control helicopters,

Time capsules, and a writing pad

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christianprep commented on helicopters

06-26-2009

hey sis i like this one ............... ....................... what do i rate it thought...lol

LadyLuck commented on helicopters

06-26-2009

hmm intresting......i wanna play? can anyone join the death race...

toriatea

06/26/2009

sure why not

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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