Make room for the Real Man

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    Make room for the Real Man
    Now that you’re gone and I start anew
    I guess that our love was not even so true
    At the beginning, nothings ever felt so right
    Then along come, the troubles and daily fights

    The time we’ve been away, has mended my heart
    I place my feelings on paper, to get a fresh start
    Speaking with you, you seem not to care
    My feelings have changed and I’m glad you not there

    As you sit and think
    Have yourself a drink
    I will not cry
    I will not blink
    If you step aside and
    I know you that you can
    Make plenty of room
    FOR THE REAL MAN!

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    PRober commented on Make room for the Real Man

    07-19-2009

    vengence is sweet, sayeth a scorned woman! lol! nice job...like your style!
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    Qualin commented on Make room for the Real Man

    07-16-2009

    jack and jill went up the hill...to take a little break...as jack fell back when he found out ..he'd made a big mistake...the summary of 90 percent..females write about...always the same ole story..just another bout. when finally REALIZING all the hurts and pain ..a love for two not meant for you..the beginning of all your doubt...look around take your time before you give away your soul ..to soothing words that steal your heart...that finally takes it's toll!!!!!!! QUALIN
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    MiaH

    07/17/2009

    Jack and Jill? Or Qualin and alcohol?

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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