ME

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    ME

    ME

     

    I USED TO BE INDEPENDENT AND STRONG

     

    BUT SINCE MY DAVIDS BEEN GONE

     

    NO MATTER WHAT I DO

     

    SEEMS TO ALWAYS GO WRONG

     

    HAVING MY FOUR KIDS

     

    MY LIFE AS A MOTHER

     

    I COULDN’T ASK FOR NO OTHER

     

    EACH KIDS HAVING A PART OF MY SOUL

     

    BUT TO LOSE MY # 1

     

    MAKES ME FEEL LESS THAN WHOLE

     

    HAPPINESS I SEEM TO LACK

     

    SO PLEASE HELP ME GOD

     

    I NEED MY LIFE BACK

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    Photojan12 commented on ME

    09-22-2009

    Sad and beautiful. Find the beautiful things in life and share with all your chidren, even David, as if he were right beside you. I have rose bushes for all the people I have loved and lost and I talk to them. Sometimes simple things help.
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    Chrisjan commented on ME

    07-18-2009

    A lot written in a few words. You will always have your four childrens' love + they in turn have your love coming back to them. But to lose a very close person, is a major loss I hear you. Remember the bright memories an not the dark ones. God is always in you, trust in Him ! Thank you for sharing + my prayers are with you.
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    kimmie1219

    07/18/2009

    Thank you for your comments.. its been 2 yrs since i lost my son.. i have lots of memories of my boy he was a great man.. sgt david m landeck jr.. r.i.p

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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