Miserable Fools

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ahh well i was inspired by my favourite book ''Wuthering Heights'' and i was reading it the last few days so i decided to make a poem about it.... this is about Heathcliff and Catherine:)

Miserable Fools

They sacrificed their lives for love

But in the end

They had unlimited hate in their heart

They stayed together even in death

Even if they knew they would face Hell

(That’s for sure) but they didn’t care

They cried together while their souls were dying

They loved each other, at least they tried

But all they knew was greed in their mind

Only to satisfy themselves and cried so many times

While she was watching him coming to her house

Happiness was all around her body, with no doubt

This love wasn’t as strong as they thought before

Their weakness to be good lovers, destroyed all they had so long ago

They were holding each other’s hand during the walk in the park

Death was near, but they sweared: no one can break us up

She betrayed him giving her heart to someone else

She cried out loud, saying: ‘’don’t go now, please, I’m such a mess’’

I’m nothing without you

This sadness will break me into pieces and make me such a miserable fool

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Dead4Rest commented on Miserable Fools

07-06-2010

such a great poem, the ending was very powerful and everything in this poem is interesting, not a single boring part!! the lead up to the ending was great and the ending did not disapoint at all, I love this poem!! great work!! :D

myimmortality

07/06/2010

thank u so much.. i can't wait to read a new poem of yours.. i'm so thirsty of reading ur amazing poetry hahah:D

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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