Someone Else

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    This is when you pretend and not being real but at last there'll always be someone who wants to make u feel like you used to be:) i hope you like it:)

    Someone Else

    So many times I thought of you

    I started to cry, I didn’t want to

    I’m broken inside, I need to hide

    I made so many mistakes

    I hurt you over and over again

    Now I try to pretend I’m alright

    I can’t stand hearing you screaming

    This is not me, this is someone else

    Someone who took over my body

    And now he doesn’t want to free me

    Will I ever take it back?

    Will I ever start to fight?

    Will i ever escape from the dark?

    Will I see myself in the light?

    And will you finally say to me

    ‘’WELCOME BACK!’’?

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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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