Vain Hopes

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    this poem was written in the darkest moment of my life!!i know it's not so good as i waited but i really hope you like it!!!:D

    Vain Hopes

    It feels like my soul is freezing

    My wounds are open, I keep bleeding

    My eyes are so wet and red

    The tears keep falling silently

    In this room there isn’t anyone but me

    I feel so lonely

    And I can’t recall the last time I was free

    Looking at the sky I felt I belonged here

    Looking at the sea and I wanted to swim

    Through these high waves where no one could see

    Someone like me

    Maybe there isn’t any reason to believe

    That it would happen again

    I’m forever lost in my confusing nightmare

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    Dead4Rest commented on Vain Hopes

    06-01-2010

    beautiful poem, I think this may be my favorite of yours, I love you so much!!

    myimmortality

    06/02/2010

    thank u my love!!!:) u're so sweet!!!:)

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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