Moving Clouds

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Moving Clouds

I am moving clouds today,

freeing the sun to clear my mind.

 

Clearing my mind to focus on

the trials of my heart.

 

My heart is tied in knots and bows,

feeling things not felt in years.

 

Years of guarding, never waning

in the defense of being hurt again.

 

The hurt was severe and cut me

deep. Recovery is taking time.

 

“Time heals all wounds” they say.

My wounds must be unique.

 

Unique in the scope not in the

manner, it is old as the world.

 

Worlds of pain and love,

more intense than fire.

 

Fires scorched the souls of

men for many millennia.

 

Millennia spent searching for

the cure to heartbreak.

 

Heartbreak leaves a scar,

almost impossible to heal.

 

Healing is the highest mountain

 with only hope as a guide.

 

Hope that you will never feel

the pain of losing love again.

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FranzJ commented on Moving Clouds

12-14-2009

heartbrake - along with love a subject written about very much

inkmaster commented on Moving Clouds

12-14-2009

Nice read simple Yet very deep I liked it a 10......inkmaster

Rygar commented on Moving Clouds

12-14-2009

a very relatable piece, well written and easy to read. i liked the incorporation of the last word of each stanza into the beginning. awesome write. a very real expression man. good job!

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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