My back

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    My back

    Friendly to the  front what about my back
    When its turned you talk your best smack
    Once friend turned foe
    Feels as I don’t know
    Respect like fire in the wind
    Not daring to reach for your hand
    Afraid to turn back on life
    For I might find a knife……..

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    amber12172 commented on My back

    07-28-2009

    wow. i love this poem. Its so amazing. And by the way i love that word. Amazing. =) haha.

    DestinedQueen commented on My back

    07-26-2009

    I can completely understand this and you pack it all into such few lines. There's a lot said here. The line "Respect like fire in the wind..." wow!!! That there is a very powerful line. You have some brilliant work and some great potential keep up the good work and never stop writing. DQ

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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