my friend holly

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    this is about my friend holly.  i'm sorry if it's terrible.  i've been sleep deprived for days, but i cant sleep cause i drank 5 cokes a few hours ago.  hope u like it.  :D :D :D :D :D

    my friend holly

    i made a new friend.

    her name is holly.

    she is a godsend.

    not a folly.

    thankyou, Jesus, for my new friend.

    she is the my favorite new godsend.

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    SpiritSong commented on my friend holly

    07-11-2009

    great little poem Christian girl...keep up the good work, and thanks for sharing it with us all...Tina

    christiangirl

    07/11/2009

    why, thank you, very much.

    christiangirl

    09/03/2009

    thankyou.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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