My Friend

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First poem about this is (Friendship Ends)> you can compare them if you like. Well I am a little sad And I regreat some things but my heart is big I want to fix this but Guess God want me to go the other way becuase things just are not working out between us friends... I am so sad... Thanks, Christianprep

My Friend

My heart is hurting,

I can't quite thinking of loosing

A friend

My mind wonders,

Why did she not understand...

Why did i act of arrogance,

Over a broken promise..

  All to lose a friend...

Wishing she would understand...

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lonewolf commented on My Friend

03-02-2012

Everyone will lose a friend or two. Most will come back when cooler heads prevail. Nice write

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

DyFriend02’s Poems (8)

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Heart Of Thorns 0
You Cannot Judge Me! 1
Fly On The Wall 2
My Friend 1
Friendship Ends 1
Psalms of a leader 0
Fishing 0
Depression 2