My Life is On the Line (cont'd)

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    My Life is On the Line (cont'd)

    My life is on the line
    I gotta write, I have to write
    Cuz these lines are my life
    Somehow I feel almost sublime
    Though, still going thru trying times
    Shiii, these words are a paradigm
    To why I gotta write, I have to write
    Cuz these lines are my life
    Or shall I say my lifeline
    See, my life is in line w/these rhymes
    They are the vine with which I'm intertwined
    And combined they create a magical wine
    Suspending me, moving me, back and forth in time
    They are the rocks on which I climb
    Struggling up and reaching the sky
    Yet still under ward by The Utmost High
    So my life is in line and on the line
    I gotta write, I have to write
    Cuz these lines are my life!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    streetprophit11 commented on My Life is On the Line (cont'd)

    04-22-2009

    A-1!! I mean what can I say...you truly got skills. Nice one love the flow, keep up the great work.

    GoldnDiosa

    10/09/2009

    great thank you so much im glad u keep up with my work and enjoy it i really like that how u been

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

    GoldnDiosa’s Poems (8)

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    EPOPEE 3
    Some Enchanted Evening 1
    I Enjoy Living 2
    To Each It's Own 3
    Steadily As I Dream 2
    My Life is On the Line (cont'd) 1
    Awakening 3