Steadily As I Dream

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    Steadily As I Dream


    I see your face in vision or am I imagining?
    I see future happiness and joy unchallenged
    I see a fresh start and a new beginning
    I see your thoughts I appreciate your talent
    I see that you also feel and want to be felt
    I see steam from your breath in the cold
    I see sweat on your brow;hot enough to melt
    I see your mights, your strong your bold
    I see your soul through your eyes so pure
    I see your heart through your words and mind
    I see your body and feel you; I want more
    I see me lost w/out you;and noone could find
    I see you soar over me like an angel or dove
    I see you so dark,so sweet and so lovely
    I see you looking at me with caring eyes
    I see you beside me,even feel you touch me
    I see you in my arms;in between my thighs
    I see you shine like rays of light,sunbeams
    I see me w/you forever Steadily As I Dream


    Copyright ©2009 Tamara Renee' Slaughter

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    arowokay commented on Steadily As I Dream

    05-14-2009

    This is good arrangement and cativating but not end well,Love the pic and more of you.

    GoldnDiosa

    10/09/2009

    funny, but i agree w/u...i tried many different endings but that was the best fit...but like a dream i guess it wasn't meant to ever truly end

    streetprophit11 commented on Steadily As I Dream

    04-22-2009

    I see that u are one of a kind once again love the flow job well done. love the pic 2

    GoldnDiosa

    10/09/2009

    thank you once again i try my hand but really i write when my heart is open so i can say something meaningful

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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