My Path

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My Path

My life is full of twits and turns

I never know when something ends

Or begins

I feel lost in this world

And even alone

 

I have chosen a path

That no one but I can follow

Making choices and following my heart

Is all that is given to me

 

I have no instructions, no directions

All I have is myself

The path I have chosen is curvy

Never a straight line

 

The problems that arrive are not easily solved

The issues that come seem to never stop

I fight my way from turn to the next

Never knowing what awaits me at the next turn

 

I feel so lonely

Having no one to talk to

Yet I know that someday someone will arrive

To help me through the thick and thin

But until then I guess I have to wait

And fight for myself

Solve problems myself

And make my own decisions

 

Hopefully my someone

Will arrive soon

For I don’t know how long I can last

By myself

 

 

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hdmac commented on My Path

06-12-2009

Interesting poem. It seems like you are in a never ending loop trying to find yourself. "through the thick and thin" is a cliche. Try to stay away from phrases like that.

soulchild commented on My Path

05-22-2009

wow i can so relate to this poem starting out as an adult so young and a mother to and i just like that there is someone that i can relate to so thanks for writtin that .

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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