My Sanity -10/16/10-

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    My Sanity -10/16/10-

    What I want

    is to be free

    forget my past

    each memory

    To erase her laughter

    and her tears

    To be carefree

    without fear

    To say goodbye

    to endless tears

     

    What I want

    is to finally breathe

    To live my life

    without being so scared

    To own a laugh

    that is sincere

    To finally say

    life is fair

     

    What I want

    I cannot have

    something lost,

    long ago gone

    A broken dream

    her loving hugs

    So many things,

    I used to have

     

    But what I need

    is to wake up

    To enjoy,

    what I actually have

    To realize,

    life goes on

    and to accept,

    she will never come back.

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    Fallen4Ever commented on My Sanity -10/16/10-

    10-04-2011

    I love that last few lines, they are very understandable
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    windsongs commented on My Sanity -10/16/10-

    10-04-2011

    some people take themselves way to serious-u seem to be one of them and a tad judgemental!
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    gloom

    10/04/2011

    Says the person who is judging me over a poem... not all writers use their own pov

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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